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Paper Instructions:
It should be at least 1,500 words long
use at least 8 reliable sources
be written in clear, academic English
contain clear in-text citations of your sources in APA style
include a clear references list in APA style at the end of your paper
Please follow the outline, but make some changes as required by my instructor.
Here is the instructor feedback to the outline please read it carefully and make the changes that are required:
The position is clear but the thesis needs to come out more strongly. What should be done with robots. Also, the thesis should have three reasons.
Section 1:
All ideas are good but the supports provided appear more as opinion. These will be more effective if replaced with facts. In what percentage of cases misunderstanding happens? Can we cite examples of SIRI, Alexa, or other similar AI systems?
Section 2:
The First 2 ideas sound very similar: aren't these both about spying?
Also, instead of sharing these as statements of opinions, it would be more effective to provide facts, like the percentage of increase in surveillance, cases of the privacy breach, etc due to these robots.
Section 3: again we need numbers/facts for all the three supports otherwise these are just opinions. In what sector have robots replacing humans. What percentage of jobs have these taken?
The counterargument and rebuttals are fine.
Intext citations: p/para numbers not included.
References show good work.