Sample ePortfolio Grading Exercise
Name ___________________________
Sample ePortfolio 1
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Outstanding (4.0-3.7) |
Strong (3.6-3.1) |
Good (3.0-2.5) |
Acceptable (2.4-2.0) |
Inadequate (1.9-1.0) |
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Critical Reflection |
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3.6 |
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Outcome 1 |
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3.4 |
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Outcome 2 |
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2.8 |
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Outcome 3 |
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2.5 |
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Outcome 4 |
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3.0 |
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Total Points / 5 = 3.1Final Grade
- Why did you give this portfolio the grade you did?
I gave the portfolio the grading mainly because of its efficiency and simplicity. The portfolio has effectively been able to minimize complexity by avoiding unnecessary and also inaccurate components. The given portfolio has fully been able to provide statements that are easy to review and assess based on the provided statements accounts. The portfolio has additionally provided handful information thus creating a connection with the reader. However the portfolio failed in demonstrating different statements accounts to the readers due to lack of transparency.
- Explain what the writer did well. Be specific. Don’t simply write “Critical Reflection,” but say what you thought was particularly strong about this critical reflection).
The critical reflection of the writer was effective. This is that the statements were well analyzed with simplicity and accuracy. The stated accounts were well established and the information created connection between the readers and the writer. The strongest thing in his critical reflection was the fact that he used eased wordings which are commonly used in conversation. This therefore created a stronger relationship between accuracy and reliability of the given information.
- Explain where the writer could have improved.
The writer would have provided statements which would have be characterized by transparency in order to make the statements of the portfolio manageable. This is effective in increasing the efficiency of the portfolio in order to increase the accuracy as well as reliability.
- What rhetorical choices does the writer make that you might use in your own ePortfolio?
The rhetorical choices that I might adopt from the writer are the use of quotations as well as the use of pictures to explain statements. This helps in increasing the morale of the readers as well as increasing their concentration. Additional these rhetorical choices helps in ensuring that the massages are well delivered as visions helps in creating durable massages.
Sample ePortfolio 2
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Outstanding (4.0-3.7) |
Strong (3.6-3.1) |
Good (3.0-2.5) |
Acceptable (2.4-2.0) |
Inadequate (1.9-1.0) |
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Critical Reflection |
4.0 |
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Outcome 1 |
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3.5 |
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Outcome 2 |
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3.0 |
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Outcome 3 |
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2.9 |
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Outcome 4 |
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3.6 |
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Total Points / 5 = 3.5 Final Grade
- Why did you give this portfolio the grade you did?
I gave the grade to the portfolio due to its manageable nature. This is in that the writer avoids confusion or statements that may be misunderstood by using simplified and general statements to deliver a given statement. This is therefore essential in ensuring that the intended message is not distorted in any way thus increasing efficiency of the portfolio. A good portfolio is the one which obeys simplicity by avoiding components that are complex. The portfolio is therefore well manageable because the readers are able to understand and utilize the massage as intended without misinterpretation.
- Explain what the writer did well. Be specific. Don’t simply write “Critical Reflection,” but say what you thought was particularly strong about this critical reflection.
The writer did well by demonstrating a well structured self reflection portfolio. This is because the expression of the writer is well demonstrated. This is conducted by establishing what is required and what he feels. He critically demonstrates his experiences to the readers by providing adequate information to increase the understanding of his readers.
The writer provides detailed information in explaining a message which helps the reader to create deeper links with the writer as well as with the given situation. The writer also provides common situations in his writing therefore helping the readers to flow with the events due to their personal experiences. This therefore is effective in ensuring that the design of the portfolio provides adequate vision to the readers without fail.
- Explain where the writer could have improved.
The writer should have improved by providing detailed quotations as well as visions. This is to increase the accuracy of the information as well as reliability. These choices help individuals in growing the bonds between the given information with their personal experiences.
- What rhetorical choices does the writer make that you might use in your own ePortfolio?
The rhetorical choice that I might adopt from the writer is the use of definitions of words. This is essential in ensure that people understands what the writer is talking about. This is because the understanding of individuals is different and therefore defining different words helps in ensuring that individuals flow with the intended message. This is in that words posse’s different meaning and therefore the readers may interpret them wrongly. The provision of words definitions is an effective way of ensuring that the project achieves efficiency due to the nature and level of the reliability.
