Sentence structure analysis

Overpopulation

In the world presently there are several issues that subject threats to daily living (Einspruch, 2013). Some persons believe that Overpopulation is currently an issue that will result in negative outcomes and should be controlled by the government through limits.  They support their claim by stating that overpopulation may result to huge effects that will results in the eradication of the human race. On the other hand, some individual believes that the world can never be overpopulated as there is adequate space for everyone.  They, therefore, state that overpopulation is of much benefit to the modern world because it results in the provision of more technological thoughts.  This group, therefore, states that overpopulation should never be addressed by the limitation of the number of children that an individual can have by the government since nature is expected to take its course to balance population (Einspruch, 2013).  These individuals believe that people have the human right of having children and this right should therefore not be limited. Both arguments hold some extent of validity because overpopulation may results to lowered rate of development since the responsibilities of caregivers and the government is increased.  On the other hand, individuals hold the capability to control the occurrence of overpopulation based on that they have the right to give birth and this right can only be limited by self (Einspruch, 2013).  I believe that overpopulation can be controlled by the government and individuals.

 

Sentence Structure Analysis

In the world (O) presently there are several issues (C) that subject threats to daily living. Some persons (S) believe (TV) that Overpopulation is currently an issue that will result in negative outcomes and should be controlled by the government through limits.  They (S) support their claim (IV) by stating that overpopulation may result to huge effects that will results in the eradication of the human race. On the other hand, some individual (S) believes (TV) that the world can never be overpopulated as there is adequate space for everyone.  They, (S) therefore, (IV) state that overpopulation (O) is of much benefit to the modern world because it results in the provision of more technological thoughts This group, (S) therefore, (IV) states that overpopulation (O) should (IV) never be addressed by the limitation of the number of children that an individual can have by the government since nature is expected to take its course to balance population.  These individuals (S) believe (TV) that people have the human right of having children (S) and (O) this right should (IV) therefore not be limited (O). Both arguments (S) hold (IV) some extent of validity because (IV) overpopulation may results to lowered rate of development since the responsibilities of caregivers (S) and (O) the government (S) is increased.  On the other hand, individuals hold (IV) the capability to control the occurrence of overpopulation (S) based on that they (S) have the right to give birth and this right can only be limited by self.  I (S) believe (TV) that Overpopulation can be controlled by the government (S) and (O) individuals (S).

 

 

 

 

Reference

Einspruch, A. (2013). Overpopulation. New York: PowerKids Press.